Sam's Reading: A Work in Progress

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12:00 am 3 June 2017

The Love Interest

So this is part romantic satire, part sci-fi, part sucks you into its own romance.

The satire was generally good but inconsistent, which left me wondering if the author couldn't maintain it or didn't intend to.

The storyline itself I loved, but for whatever reason it felt choppily put together. Perhaps it is the narrator having little sense of himself other than survival becoming defined by the people closest to him or he was there all along etc etc. Regardless, there was an issue with flow that i can quite articulate.

Was it fun? Yes. I enjoyed the read, but I think the flow/writing felt choppy.