Nope, they seem too juvenile. I know it's early but I don't have it in me to continue based on the first 5 chapters.
Pretend you don't know they are lawyers and lmk(this is from later, but an example):
Braden!” I glared at him and then what he had said sunk in. “Wait, am I your girlfriend?”
“Do you want to be my girlfriend?”
“Well, yeah.”
“Then you’re my girlfriend. And I know that you deserve better than me too, but I don’t care, because I’m selfish and I want you."
Well, yeah....